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Purity?
You tell me I'm beautiful,
A Princess,
That my life would have more value
If not defined
By sex
But all the works and self help
Can't change
The filth on my soul and the dirt of overuse
Sin and abuse
Stuck
So don't tell me theres hope
A checklist
Of purity and principle in
Ambiguity
Of direction
Because it's a lie without Jesus
The Christ
Hope alone in the blood that washes clean
Pure white
Instead
Self help won't ever help
Unless Truth
Shines through the message
In Christ
Alone
How can we get 'better'?
Without first
Acknowledging Him who first loved us
And died
To Redeem
Alive in Him now my stains are cleansed
Reclaimed
In His blood alone is the freedom and will
To Live
For Him
So yes, I'm the daughter, the beloved
Of the King
Whose blood alone overcomes the curse of my sin
Redeemed
Clean
So don't tell me half the truth
As if
All my 'better person'-ing could make me acceptable
To the One
Who's Perfect...
Without what Jesus did.
Purity is in Him and for Him.
You tell me I'm beautiful,
A Princess,
That my life would have more value
If not defined
By sex
But all the works and self help
Can't change
The filth on my soul and the dirt of overuse
Sin and abuse
Stuck
So don't tell me theres hope
A checklist
Of purity and principle in
Ambiguity
Of direction
Because it's a lie without Jesus
The Christ
Hope alone in the blood that washes clean
Pure white
Instead
Self help won't ever help
Unless Truth
Shines through the message
In Christ
Alone
How can we get 'better'?
Without first
Acknowledging Him who first loved us
And died
To Redeem
Alive in Him now my stains are cleansed
Reclaimed
In His blood alone is the freedom and will
To Live
For Him
So yes, I'm the daughter, the beloved
Of the King
Whose blood alone overcomes the curse of my sin
Redeemed
Clean
So don't tell me half the truth
As if
All my 'better person'-ing could make me acceptable
To the One
Who's Perfect...
Without what Jesus did.
Purity is in Him and for Him.
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I'm sorry if this poem is a little harsh, but it is a poem in protest against the well meaning 'Christian' version of purity teaching for women that ignores the cross and focusses just on what we can do to better ourselves. Tell us not just that we have hope.. but why!
We do need to hear affirmation, encouragement and truth about purity and virginity... but we also need to hear the Gospel, the Cross.. where our stains are healed and our ability to overcome sin through Jesus comes from. Without the Truth all we have is glorified self help. And assurance in our own ability to 'keep ourselves nice'.
And as a Jimmy Needham song goes.. 'and no one has ever been saved by their good intentions'
We do need to hear affirmation, encouragement and truth about purity and virginity... but we also need to hear the Gospel, the Cross.. where our stains are healed and our ability to overcome sin through Jesus comes from. Without the Truth all we have is glorified self help. And assurance in our own ability to 'keep ourselves nice'.
And as a Jimmy Needham song goes.. 'and no one has ever been saved by their good intentions'
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WOW! WOW! POWerful!.... you hit the nail on the head.
A broken creation can't fix it self... on the Creator
A broken creation can't fix it self... on the Creator